Hour after hour slips
Dissolving in the current of time
Days unwind with nothing momentous
In this vapid existence
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Drab Existence is a lovely Five-liner bringing to the fore one experiences at times of remorse.
A lovely poem read. Dissolving in the current of time Removing any dirt if stuck... Flaunt your Trophy with glitter and shine.
Learned two words! That's my trophy! Your trophy as your poems displayed on PH all over! Loved it.
You can flaunt your trophy of writing such beautiful poems with panache!
Existence never seeks trophies. These quiet moments may provide future motivation. Beautifully penned. Thank you.
This vapid existence is the foundation that should be laid carefully and as far as a trophy is concerned leave it for Him but have a trust in His rewards of real vanity. A nice poem.
As a blessed and gifted poetess there will never be dearth of trophies for you......Valsa.....your work is your great award.......amazing piece...10/10
Exquisite composing. Very nice expression in five lines. Many thanks.
You are presenting us all Trophies every day with your support, your honesty, your caring nature, But mostly your wonderful words. So I thank you. x
As a blessed and gifted poetess there will never be dearth of trophies for you......Valsa.....your work is your great award.......amazing piece
As a blessed and gifted poetess there will never be dearth of trophies for you......Valsa.....your work is your great award.......amazing piece
Sometimes life get bogged down in the current of time. Yes poetess, you can of course flaunt your interesting poems!
In fact the poetess have gained much trophies from the readers through the valuable and appreciating comments I think. This is a beautiful poem.
To have people read what you write and admire you for it seems to me the greatest trophy. You've got both, poetic lady.
In this vapid existence Can I ever flaunt a trophy? .......very brilliant question that can bring a sound answer. Beautiful poem nicely delineated.