Five Liner. Drab Existence Poem by Valsa George

Five Liner. Drab Existence

Rating: 5.0


Hour after hour slips
Dissolving in the current of time
Days unwind with nothing momentous
In this vapid existence
Can I ever flaunt a trophy?

Friday, December 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 December 2014

Existence never seeks trophies. These quiet moments may provide future motivation. Beautifully penned. Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 December 2014

This vapid existence is the foundation that should be laid carefully and as far as a trophy is concerned leave it for Him but have a trust in His rewards of real vanity. A nice poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 December 2014

As a blessed and gifted poetess there will never be dearth of trophies for you......Valsa.....your work is your great award.......amazing piece...10/10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 December 2014

Exquisite composing. Very nice expression in five lines. Many thanks.

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Lyn Paul 19 December 2014

You are presenting us all Trophies every day with your support, your honesty, your caring nature, But mostly your wonderful words. So I thank you. x

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 April 2019

In this vapid existence Can I ever flaunt a trophy? .......very brilliant question that can bring a sound answer. Beautiful poem nicely delineated.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 January 2015

Drab Existence is a lovely Five-liner bringing to the fore one experiences at times of remorse.

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Amitava Sur 30 December 2014

A lovely poem read. Dissolving in the current of time Removing any dirt if stuck... Flaunt your Trophy with glitter and shine.

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Savita Tyagi 30 December 2014

Learned two words! That's my trophy! Your trophy as your poems displayed on PH all over! Loved it.

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Hazel Durham 22 December 2014

You can flaunt your trophy of writing such beautiful poems with panache!

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