Five Liner- Another Dawn Comments

A beautiful poem to awaken to. It negative wind chill here. To visualize your poem sunshine was truly a blessing.

This is the perfect poem to wake up with! ... It is morning now here, and it is such a lovely day, and such a lovely poem!

The beautiful experience of sun-rise with another dawn is soothing in your poem, Valsa.

Sunshine makes the day bright. Cool breeze provides a loving touch.

I see two suns here - the celestial sun of the day and the sun of wakefulness. Then the lover comes - the breeze that ruffles the hair and then keeps company throughout the waking day as sunshine. Beautiful.

It's a nice five liner, you have reminded me of Jay Shankar Prasad' poem - Beeti vibhavri Jagri, Amber panghat mein dubo rahi tara ghat usha nagari. If you could not understand, read its translation by me in English.......10

Great imagery painted with wonderful and shining words.......Valsa........amazing write......10

A Beautiful poem Valsa. Sun rise tell us the new day has began is as good as lover's touch that make our day most beautiful. A Beautiful day has began with beautiful flow of words from your pen. Loved it.

The beautiful synergy of man and nature captured in rich imagery. Nice work.

The beautiful synergy of man and nature captured in rich imagery. Nice work.

Another dawn, another blessing to love.

Great expression of sun rise which is the beautiful experience that continues in every day and really enjoyable to us. The poet expresses the feeling in simple and beautiful words and it is a great expression as well as good poem.