Five Liner. An Exhortation Comments

Rise Awake into action! yeah right you are everyone is the true outcome of own deeds; good deeds beget beautiful life and misdeeds beget melancholic present!

This poem is greatly motivational poem. Getting God's grace of course all friends will rise into power. This poem is interesting and lovely. I highly appreciate your effort! ..10++

Wonderful words of wisdom! ! !

This poem has contained a nice exhortation through the fine inking of a poetess. Valuable dictadictums. I fully appreciate this poem. Full vote.

In anticipation! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Time is very precious and no time to be wasted. All should realize importance of time and with universal friendship all should rise in to right action. Clock reminds always to work hard and achieve life's goal. Very interesting and pleasant sharing....10

A very valuable cautioning is spelled in this small poem what is irrecoverable. Very true. As I say in my way - I move in one direction only never, I retreat. Once I depart and go away- Will never come again.

A 'timely' exhortation that has eternal value.

No time to lose. Just put things into action. Great advice. Thank you.

Motivational....................................Inspirational........................Outstanding poem.

Yes every proceeding moment is death of the preceding moment. A nice poem.........................10

Agree one 100% Time and time does not wait for anyone. Procrastination begins early - sometimes in childhood. and then continues as a habit. wise five lines and very educational. I feel that such Liners should be written at the end of English text books.