Five Liner. An Exhortation Poem by Valsa George

Five Liner. An Exhortation

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Rise, Oh friends, rise into action!
No time to be wasted in procrastination
Nor for the ripe moment, in anticipation
As the tiny seconds that go 'tick-tock'
Are irrecoverably dispelled from life’s clock

Tuesday, September 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 19 September 2015

Time is very precious and no time to be wasted. All should realize importance of time and with universal friendship all should rise in to right action. Clock reminds always to work hard and achieve life's goal. Very interesting and pleasant sharing....10

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Amitava Sur 09 September 2015

A very valuable cautioning is spelled in this small poem what is irrecoverable. Very true. As I say in my way - I move in one direction only never, I retreat. Once I depart and go away- Will never come again.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 09 September 2015

A 'timely' exhortation that has eternal value.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 September 2015

No time to lose. Just put things into action. Great advice. Thank you.

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M Asim Nehal 09 September 2015

Motivational....................................Inspirational........................Outstanding poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 March 2020

Rise Awake into action! yeah right you are everyone is the true outcome of own deeds; good deeds beget beautiful life and misdeeds beget melancholic present!

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Budhashaya Behera 19 February 2020

This poem is greatly motivational poem. Getting God's grace of course all friends will rise into power. This poem is interesting and lovely. I highly appreciate your effort! ..10++

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Wonderful words of wisdom! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2017

This poem has contained a nice exhortation through the fine inking of a poetess. Valuable dictadictums. I fully appreciate this poem. Full vote.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 May 2017

In anticipation! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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