Five Liner- A Little Song On Spring Comments

My usual worries are: spring does not last long, it looks as if it might this year. Thanks God, the poem is a five-liner. and not a haiku!

A lovely little song on Spring. It captures the season of rebirth and renewal. A wonderful description full of images. Beautifully written.

Sunlight glistens, daffodils and daisies spring Bringing joy and cheer to uncounted hearts /// cheerful and delighted spring knocks the farewell chariot of winter to leave the earth hurry and spring the queen of seasons enjoys the earth with full of happiness and graceful embodiment///

How spring brings joy and cheer to uncounted hearts is nicely and touchingly delineated in this poem. A beautiful poem on spring shared amazingly.10

Spring has its melody in your poem Valsa.++10 Robert

Certainly spring has a special meaning to all, and as you rightly wrote, there is the expectancy of new life. Thanks Valsa.

Though sleeting and snow falling have their own charms but the spring winds have something for the life. Let us feel and think that something and spring like colorful flowers. A beautiful song by Valsa George.

Daffodils and daisies spring as spring comes to life. Beautiful five liner.

Nothing is quite as beautiful as Spring.. Here in West Bengals we have cuckoos singing all day long.. A beautiful poem for a beautiful season..

I too look forward to the first blooms of spring. Poetry in themselves

To adorn the barren spaces. Nice piece of work.

Spring.....reincarnation of nature.....Beautiful.....Beautifully expressed in few lines.....thank you for sharing :)

A riot of colors...beautiful. Spring is truly a time of rebirth. This poem really brightens up the mood of the reader. Thanx for sharing.