Thursday, January 14, 2016

Five Liner- A Humble Prayer Comments

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After my death, none my wrongs memorize
In the annals of time, let them freeze
Or fly away with the breeze
From my soul, all stains erase
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 July 2019

An outstanding poem on death and peace has been shared here amazingly by you. Thanks for sharing this Five Liner.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2019

A wonderful prayer that I think majority of us if not all will ardently wish and hope that through the intervention of God Almighty we will depart in this world without baggage. A unique write brilliantly penned.

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Mihaela Pirjol 23 November 2018

When I was a little girl, I used to be fascinated by epitaphs: pure poetry, like the language of the soul! This prayer has the same sublime beauty!

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Savita Tyagi 20 January 2016

Such beautiful prayer. Peace is most cherished in the world full of turmoil. Thank you Valsa for sharing.

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Aarzoo Mehek 18 January 2016

Ameen, I pray we all find peace in this world and hereafter too.

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Alesia Leach 15 January 2016

A lovely prayer beautifully written that I think I will use tonight for all my wrongs of the day

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Kelly Kurt 15 January 2016

A lament we all share at times

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 January 2016

Yes! Death is part of us; with our journeys on this earth. Nice work.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 January 2016

Touched my heart like the soft breeze, Valsa!

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Akhtar Jawad 15 January 2016

Amen! A nice prayer, I liked it......................................

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 January 2016

Very beautifully penned unique wish list, as always. Birth and death are two definite destinations in which shuttles the progeny of human, so why the later be allowed to influence us while living a meaningful life. Thanks for sharing.

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