Five Liner. A Hen's Cackling Comments

Deep imagination. Aptly envisioned in five lines.Many thanks.

Deep imagination. Aptly envisioned in five lines.Many thanks.

Sure, she is a mother and the joy should be the same as it is universal. Good theme for a five-liner.

Wonderful imagination, Valsa! As you say it must be the same joy the mother feels after giving birth to a child. Beautiful five -liner!

Questions of nature's wonder are beautifully posed through chicken cackling after laying an egg. Nice poem. Enjoyed. Thank you.

Valsa- profound and ennobling thinking in this little five liner. Creation in any form is a beautiful thing to behold-10

Very creative indeed......Valsa.......really no joy is better than the joy of creation.....wonderful composition....10

haha..something to ponder on...may b they have d same feelings for bringing a wonderful creature to existence in this Earth

That is the joy of creating abilities, one can imagine how much God enjoyed when he became a creator!

Wonderful five liner poem raising an eternal question. Thanks for sharing

Very good thought, Valsa. I enjoyed this one. RoseAnn

Excellent poem. I have voted it a ten.