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A naked body
bronze as the sun
poises against the sky
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Very fastinating. An illustration of the fact that at first sight we might not see all that we are looking at but if we prolong our looking we see so many more things there. And it is not just a fact of what we see but also of what our other senses contribute. A poem worth reading more than once, even though the last stanza has a certain finality to it.
The last image brings the first person singular of this poem into the scene and unite all the images in a single totality. A poem composed of images like still life paintings. Personification of the day is wonderful. Regards Naseer
what a cool idea to illuminate one concept in several ways............ each one does the trick wonderfully well