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An interesting poem written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem of yours....

Marvelous observation of movements of little dog and the bird with equally marvelous interpretation of their actions have made this poem superb nature poem.

A lovely poem from the pen of Elizabeth Bishop

answer was there but under the dark layer days come and go -no need to discover- warning for the unknown savior! all answer were there but under dark fear we can't discover……! ./// great poem

A dawning well-observed. Then the two closing lines that give it umph! and explain the perspective behind the lines that preceded it. How much a new dawn, a new day, can lift us! -GK

A meaningful poem from the pen of a great poetess

A fine poem from a great poetess. tony

The weight of yesterday difficult to lift and cope with, not like the dog who has no sense of shame..

He has no sense of shame! ! Some people are like that! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

i like this poem! it is very good!