Five Fingers Comments

Plain and simple and short. A 'love' poem. bri : )

Perfectly fitted as if by design Your five fingers woven in mine- - - > holding the hand of the one you love is another way to make love

it's really beautiful poem shared Your five fingers woven in mine Coupled palms sublimely connecting/// beautiful writings

It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10.

Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks! -Michael

Oh Brian, this is a most beautiful love poem, What a lovely change to read something about love, I lilke that---Melvina---

so romantic..wish someone would write a poem like that about my fingers..its so refreshing to read poems of love written from the masculine perspective.. so passionate, astute and sensual.

Beautifully crafted poem. Fits me like a warm glove. All plaudits are well deserved! Best wishes. jack

Six lines that perfectly fit their function. A poetic arrow that hits the bulls-eye. jim

absolutely beautiful in just a few lines...You have conveyed so much. I love this poem..well done Bryan Arti

Don't know how else to say this, but 'For a poem that uses rhyme, / This one is absolutely divine.' It is one of those where it crossed my mind, hey, why didn't I think of that? High praise from Mr. Shot Gunn.

Brian, I LOVE this piece! It's simplistic yet powerful. You have combined a powerhouse of words eloquently! Great write!

Sweet sweet sweet and perfectly divine! Love it.

An enchanting poem! I enjoyed it very much.

I've always said along with others, Good things come in small packages. This is a wonderful poem Brian. Melvina

Loved this Brian. Thanks for this wonderful thoughts. Cheers, Lynne

Hi Brian, I love your poetry, it is light and fun. You sound like you are happy soul. Excellent poem take care.

Beautifully written. Lovely imagery and very compassionately done. Very nice, thanks! Keep writing :)

Truly great poetry here. 10 for sure! -chuck

two boats of bliss sailing through universe. good one brian.