Friday, January 17, 2014

Five Feet Ten Comments

Rating: ★4.5

And then you were lost in the grey of the moody mountain
She looked as if she hid my dreams under the veil of silence
She keeps on her own but the clouds still are her playmates
So they would guard the moon and she wouldn’t protest
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Debanjan Dhar
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Susan Lacovara 17 January 2014

This is an exciting and elaborate write, that captured me instantly! I especially liked the line....wish you had kissed me a scar. Brilliant!

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Debanjan Dhar

Debanjan Dhar

Calcutta
Debanjan Dhar
Debanjan Dhar
Calcutta
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