Saturday, October 18, 2014

Five Elements(Panch Tatva /Panch Indriyan) Comments

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We are the poetry of five elements,
Earth, water, air, fire, sky, it represents,
Sky; envelop of the earth, like soul to body,
Our fate depends on rest three,
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Savita Tyagi 18 October 2014

Nicely worded poem. Without the envelop all the elements scattered around. Dust to dust.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 October 2014

A nice and thoughtful poem. Number five appears in our lives in various ways. You have nicely picked the wonders of number five.

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