Five Day Affair Comments

Amazing ambiance captured throughout... great write, Sonny! Brian

Very creative. Original in that it is a 5 not 7-day affair & in that it starts on a particular day. I rather see it with a space between each subtitle & body. Consider numbering them instead & keep the Monday.

I like this poem because it is very sheer in nature. The setting was awsome. Loved it. Thx, N.D.

It reminds me of the lyrics of a song Sonny Back to life Back to reality Back to the here and now. I liked the shyness of this affair though. Some take things far too quickly, relationships are to be savoured and nurtured, not gobbled up on sight. Smiling at you with 10 from Tai