Monday, August 11, 2014

Fit Comments

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I didn't fit in small
I didn't fit in big
I didn't fill a void
I guess I didn't do much.
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Mary Lyle
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Hans Vr 11 August 2014

Very well written poem. The fit is never perfect. When we are IN love we think it is but soon we become aware. If both sides are willing to hold on to each other's hands, we do not need to fit. Many times we cannot convert our IN love to love. Something quite hard in the moment but in the long run very much ok. Just some thoughts running through my mind after reading your nice and thought provoking poem.

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Mary Lyle

Mary Lyle

Morganton, NC
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