Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Fission Vs Fusion (School School School School School) Comments

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Atoms attracted by great gravity
To be compacted into new nucleate
Absorbing energy to smelting rate
Combining into the next unity
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Udiah (witness to Yah)
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Brian Minniear 19 June 2014

Interesting pentameter, strange feet; A nice blend of style for the sake of style. Lovely visuals Very nice comparisons Five syllables here ;)

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Sankar Sehanabis 16 June 2014

Wao! Nice! Science to poetry............ I Like it.

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