Friday, July 18, 2014

Fishwoman Comments

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Her mind strays as she cuts into pieces
her spread of the morning's fish
fills an ache him she misses
couldn't hold him back her wish.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2014

Beautiful poem portrayed on life of Fisherwoman. She does her job keeping aside all her pain in her heart. The way you described in beautiful lines..she spoons fish scales cuts neat slice...in midst of crowd who bargains. Finally by noon she sells and may or may not earn much profit as she did her routine work with pain. This is the true picture you have portrayed. Loved reading it.

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Tribhawan Kaul 18 July 2014

Beautiful poetic picturisation of a fishwoman.

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