Fishing With Dad Comments

Smoky Nicely layed down.it flows nicely.well done

Don't we all wish we could back to that lake or stream and fish with our dads just one last time. Super write Smoky.

This memory of fishing with your dad must give you mixed emotions but i'm sure you must be glad you have this memory to hold on to. Nice poem Smoky.

I like your lead up to where you remember your Dad when both of you went fishing together.10.