Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Fishing The Izu-Ogasawara (Tanka Style) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Giant orb of deep
Unseen by the sun or moon
Tentacles sink ship
Far, far reaching black trenches
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Marcus McKinley
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Pranab K Chakraborty 01 November 2010

Beautiful species. Beautiful indeed As the human child in the womb. Unseen by the the sun and moon. Yet it exists splashing, crashing, crushing. Fantastic. Just an atomic poem. Radiation reaches through the universe. Yet it exists. Good poem. Good.10/10 Regards, pranab

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