Sunday, May 4, 2014

Fishing From A Barstool Comments

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Perched on a bar stool
Statuesque and proud
Her long legs a flashing
Posing for the crowd
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James Mazalic
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Stephen W 14 September 2014

Amusing effort. Nicely paced. Typo: should be 'passed' not 'past'.

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Colleen Courtney 05 May 2014

Boy does this poem remind me of myself in my younger years! Fantastic write!

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Douglas Scotney 04 May 2014

I've seen that movie too, JM...

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Nice poem. Liked the ending.

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