Monday, October 5, 2009

Fishing For Sharks Comments

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My father looks so beautiful
As he kills what is his:
My father looks beautiful, dressed up for showbiz:
How many enjambments has he come to cost;
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Robert Rorabeck
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Kerry O'Connor 05 October 2009

Some exceptionally beautiful images in this poem: 'a holiday of fear', 'a mother of tombs: I want you swept and Colorless and weaving stories on looms', 'the low bridges of centipedes'. Don't know that I agree with the picture of womanhood being good only for baking pies, sweeping up and fornication... rather too cliched surely? LOL

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