Tuesday, September 4, 2007

Fishing For Compliments Comments

Rating: 5.0

She spritzes her honeydew perfume from head to toe,
even a dropp on her ankles.
I dare not ask why.
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Amanda Lukas
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Duncan Wyllie 04 September 2007

A poem well-caught, ok, I just couldn't resist that one, but the imagery and picture that this poem paints is lovely Thankyou Love duncan X

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Chuck Audette 04 September 2007

Great poem, although at the end of her efforts I wonder if she'll find she landed a trophy fish or merely reeled in a night crawler.. -chuck

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Ft. Lauderdale, FL
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