Fishes In Blues Comments

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Hunting and being hunted are the two phases of life. Man is the most aggressive predator here and the rest of the organisms just survive.. Your poem throws light at the great reality of a helpless living system. Except the undue length of the poem everything is superb here and I am giving you Ten out of ten Kanav...

Wonderful poem with great meaning in it. Humans eat themselves, the humans are really dumb after all. Very true said. It take years for one to realise that they eat themselves by giving importance to others greedy words. Loved reading it Kanav...

Even though they come from a golden seed yet there heart overflows with greed. A great line. Wonderful words Kanav. Thank you

Wow, some sweet writing here.

How well you have brought out certain salient truths through a story poem! ! No one eats the humans, but they eat themselves.... yes, we allow ourselves to be consumed by greed, jealousy, hatred and so many such negative emotions..... Very mature thoughts coming out from a youngster! ! I award you a 10

a truth portrayed powerfully!

Excellent Kanav, and so true - humans are pretty dumb. They have the intelligence to change the world but they don't do it.

Really well thought out poem.We humans are dumb we kill each other and pollute the world that our quality of life depends. Beautifully written with wise observation of human failure.

Just a brilliant piece............portraying different faces of life....... at last coming of humans shedding crocodile tears....... Kanav......your style of expression is unique which most I like and for which in my list you are my favourite..... thanks for sharing.......

i think poem is not finished yet. every one is prey of another. 'Sowing seeds of life for creation of a new life for survival of the existing life' though concluding line defer from the subject but after all a powerful and poignant write sketching the naked picture of human being. thnx for sharing.

what a powerful and inspiring piece! This poem is filled with symbolism, giving such beauty and wisdom in every verse. Good write and thanks for sharing. :) I invite you to read my poems and leave comments on them. You are a young and talented poet. Thanks again.