Saturday, September 20, 2008

Fish Tales Comments

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The falling rain
Cannot detain
An eager fisherman.
He makes his way
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Marianna Jo Arolin
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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008

O very beautiful. Nice job is done. Like it.

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Andrew Lockley 20 September 2008

haha a different subject of poetry finally and you did it well. I especially liked the ending, not because it was finishing because it was a good read, but it ended on a humerous note. Very good.

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