Monday, September 1, 2008

Fish Supper In Black And White Comments

Rating: 4.5

I feel I ought to explain that this is a Trigee poem, two short poems that can stand alone and may also be combined to form a third. I'm not sure of the origin of the style but it's fun to play with.
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Martin O'Neill
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Ruth Walters 09 March 2012

that's so clever Martin...it reads down and across

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Bianca F. 07 March 2012

great imagery, great style, great poem: 3

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Karen Deeks 07 March 2012

It is indeed in black and White.. No punches barred, straight as it is... I love the layout of this piece... Gives moments of pause. I make you right on the bringing the last of the cod home.. Luckily I'm guilt free yay! I'm terrified of fish so have never eaten the scary little goggle eyed monsters :) I do see the serious messages here and understand the seriousness of your message.

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Patti Masterman 04 March 2012

Wow, what a tang there is in those lines, hehe.. :)

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Vijay Sai R 16 February 2012

its looking like a picture painted in reality...nicely narrated

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Gone Away 16 March 2010

Very clever in style and substance.

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Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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