Fish And Water Comments

This portrays water in an abstract manner; something that is all around us yet that we are unable to see. We take things for granted, not thinking about what we're really doing at times. The big fish has been through life and is like our wise grandparent. He has made mistakes and learnt lessons along the way. Like the big fish, we should all appreciate the water in our lives.

Raveendran Nicely layed down.it flows nicely.well done

Dear Raveendan, your classical 'fishy' story explains with clarity that which we seek is often right under our noses. A paradoxical poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Raveendran, thet was beautiful, I think that on a Sanskrit it sounds better. I like yours philosophicall verses... thenks, Tsira

Pure enchantment! I believe that fish even survived the deluge.They just do what comes naturally. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

Moving in your own elements is natural you see no need to question it unless you arehuman and cursed with curiosity

beautiful and very philosophic