Fish And A Free Bird Comments

Hi Rini, I just made a re! ! And want to come back again

Dear poet, This beautiful little poem contains a story. That story tells me a resemblance story as shadow of it. A girl wants to live with full of freedom. but the life after the marriage it goes totally against to her wishes.

Poor Jane, I love a poem with a story, very imaginative Rini :)

Hi Rini, A simple poem, which can be relished even by children, With a moral. One should dream and try to fulfill the dream, achieve it. But not riding on others' shoulders. It could prove to be a trap...So, Fulfill it on your own; your own efforts.

A thought provoking poem nicely presented. Rini, you have cutely submitted a story on dreams of a fish with a sad ending. Interesting write.

This is a very creative poem with a very sad ending.