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Very original images used in this context. Great poem. There is always a little light inside our soul A little light inside our heart. Am sure you will find it and let it brighten your day

Brilliantly written poem Jinal, just adopt an i am a surviver attitude and stop crying..wow! this poem is superb.

Don't cry, little Nemo, please. In this world that consists of more water than land, you will survive. This poem is really written well, it's beautiful.

Oh lil fish, cry just cry but your tears never seen in water....fish dear fish, dont scare you wont drown, go deeper and you will safe..this is your land and your air is water..breathe my fish friend, breathe this is your world where you own your own way....find you friends, crab, prawn and shells, you will see you are smoother to move so dont cry or keep cry coz your tears never seen nor wont dry..you will be bigger a bigger fish to save yourself, as but big fish cant save others if it never take lesson when it was a lil fish...so learn learn more lil fish in your colors you will survive between the corals until you bigger_Unwritten Soul

A really great poem, liked it.