Tuesday, June 24, 2014

Fish Comments

Rating: 5.0

They swarm, they swim, they nestle and play
They laugh, they giggle and merrily sway
Filled with life; do they fill with life
the vast expanse of an ocean bay?
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Rosmin Elsa Mohan
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Valsa George 15 July 2014

Beautiful observation of life with a nice comparison of humans with fish. Both kill and are killed! Enjoyed this highly rhyming poem and I find here a highly imaginative brain at work! I award you a10 for this splendid write!

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan

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