I envied my wife her nightly visions.
She'd lay each one proudly on the bed
like a plump, iridescent fish,
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It is a multi layered poem. Hold the reader's imagination right from the start. Very well written. Good exhibition of craft.
This is a great poem about life growing in time between lovers be two... With no sight in time of ever being through. Love's problems and conclusionary solvement of puzzles placed carefully on a sheet... Never unfaithful and never to cheat. Great poem deserving of and receiving of a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.
Moniza Nicely layed down.it flows nicely.well done