Friday, January 3, 2003

Fish Comments

Rating: 4.1

I envied my wife her nightly visions.
She'd lay each one proudly on the bed

like a plump, iridescent fish,
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Moniza Alvi
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Brian Jani 17 May 2014

Moniza Nicely layed down.it flows nicely.well done

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Moz Rauf 29 October 2008

It is a multi layered poem. Hold the reader's imagination right from the start. Very well written. Good exhibition of craft.

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Michael Gale 11 October 2006

This is a great poem about life growing in time between lovers be two... With no sight in time of ever being through. Love's problems and conclusionary solvement of puzzles placed carefully on a sheet... Never unfaithful and never to cheat. Great poem deserving of and receiving of a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.

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