Sunday, May 11, 2008

# Fish Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was her fish!

an expression spread over large expanse
on a rocky range; from endearment to derision
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Rehan Hyder
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Orange Geometry 30 May 2008

this grief overwhelms me it burns in my stomach...

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An abstract Pen-Gem, swimming in a poetic sea of darting wit, and cleverity, indeed, my friend! ROCK-ON! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Indira Babbellapati 20 May 2008

sheer magic from everyday tunes!

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Waqas Naeem 15 May 2008

It's amazing, the magic you do with words.... 'the fish in me yearns for your deep waters your salinity san salt' absolutely fantastic! !

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David Desantis 15 May 2008

'the fish in me yearns for you deep water' 'Scales of guilt stuck in way' -very descriptive one here......great job 10/10

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