Friday, May 13, 2011

Firstborn Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was her first born.
For some reason, the child she would scorn.
She left her around the age of three.
She never gave that child a chance to love thee.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 May 2011

Awesome work. Great sentiments with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A daring hope' on page 1.

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