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Friday, September 18, 2015

First Word I Took Was You Comments

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First word i took was you

I was a just a micron within you
With u until the pain separated us
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Fabrizio Frosini 18 September 2015

maybe you'd check your write for some typos/grammar.. but there's a great feeling expressed in your verse, Navami.. and I'm sure your mom is proud of you Welcome at PH! Blessings

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Navami Patil 19 September 2015

TY SIR FOR YOUR BLESSINGS AND I AM STILL TAKING MY BABY STEPS IN POETRY @fabrizio frosini

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