First Trip To The Pool For Rosie Comments

Well done Rosie! And a cute little poem Stevie. I love the fifth verse.

Having always been the chubby kid I have found myself to be somewhat of a human floatie: -) This poem is another peek into the creative genius of Stevie: -)

This is fantastic Stevie. I as a reader watched it all. really I was anxious about their swimming ability. I love the way this poem started and ended. You did not give time to your readers to stop and drink some water to wet their throats. Fantastic Stevie. The rhythm and the words. Real artist you are. and I will call it poet's photography. You have presented the whole scene artistically. and the water not so cold........................ Felt it. 'I can' he boasted. But really he could not His goggles made his ears stick out As in the pool he got. hahahahah Fabulous

Swimming is inherent I think, although I was never any good at it. Clever write