At fourteen I was just too ill at ease,
Tall for my age, boys would constantly tease…
They would snigger, and say here comes giraffe
I wished like Alice, I could shrink, as they laughed.
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How charming this poem is, a fourteen year old girl longing for her first love, thanks for this, 10 Lynda xx
This 43 years old love story still sizzles.........wonderful nostalgia....you filled us with
lolzzzzzzzz..........hehe..........well penned mam......suerly...i must be looking silly too now
Adequate 'common salt' in this 'spicy' chemistry lab recipe... most readers would sport similar silly smiles on reading this piece, Mamta...me for one, for sure...10
Mamta, it only had to happen once, for you to recall a special moment from your past. First kiss, has now become a lovely poem for us all to enjoy. Giraffe's! ! now they are my favourite creature, 'beanpole neck, head perched high, huge brown eyes with lashes long, a mouth with curling toungue, a face a human one that smiles and smiles. Bob
a chnace smile/a stolen kiss...many more firsts remain forever secure within several layers!
Oh what an ammmmmmmazing poem! Half an hour before landed from aircraft in Dhaka for a short period. just open laptop to log in poem hunter and this is first comment on the way to home. This is a greeeeeen poem! I am glad just now reading this fine piece! 10+++++
I felt warm and I think I blushed Could it be I had my first crush? Rachel Ann Butler