Sunday, December 14, 2008

# First Time I Missed A Heart Beat... Comments

Rating: 2.7

At fourteen I was just too ill at ease,
Tall for my age, boys would constantly tease…
They would snigger, and say here comes giraffe
I wished like Alice, I could shrink, as they laughed.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

I felt warm and I think I blushed Could it be I had my first crush? Rachel Ann Butler

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Lynda Robson 20 January 2009

How charming this poem is, a fourteen year old girl longing for her first love, thanks for this, 10 Lynda xx

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 December 2008

This 43 years old love story still sizzles.........wonderful nostalgia....you filled us with

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Reshma Ramesh 23 December 2008

lolzzzzzzzz..........hehe..........well penned mam......suerly...i must be looking silly too now

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2008

Adequate 'common salt' in this 'spicy' chemistry lab recipe... most readers would sport similar silly smiles on reading this piece, Mamta...me for one, for sure...10

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Bob Blackwell 20 December 2008

Mamta, it only had to happen once, for you to recall a special moment from your past. First kiss, has now become a lovely poem for us all to enjoy. Giraffe's! ! now they are my favourite creature, 'beanpole neck, head perched high, huge brown eyes with lashes long, a mouth with curling toungue, a face a human one that smiles and smiles. Bob

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Indira Babbellapati 17 December 2008

a chnace smile/a stolen kiss...many more firsts remain forever secure within several layers!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 December 2008

Oh what an ammmmmmmazing poem! Half an hour before landed from aircraft in Dhaka for a short period. just open laptop to log in poem hunter and this is first comment on the way to home. This is a greeeeeen poem! I am glad just now reading this fine piece! 10+++++

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