Wednesday, October 14, 2009

First Time Comments

Rating: 4.6

first time,
when we met,
for a blink you
appeared, in
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ritty patnaik
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Rakesh Bedi 15 October 2009

very impessive expressions, ritty....what is the diff in fate n destiny, dear....plz let me know......

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Ejaz Khan 14 October 2009

Amazing expression in end lines, really enjoyed it!

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Vaibhav Pandey 14 October 2009

'waiting for you, is my destiny, waiting for eternity is perhaps my fate'.....very poetic and touching lines...I loved it ma'm..10

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