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Wow... Alison things are heating up again down under...10

a great piece of well penned poetry.

Wow! What a great way to dream and if it wasn't real well what a pity! ! Wonderful romp of a poem! HG: -) xx

Alison, they say it gets steamy when it is hot. It must be very hot down your way this week. I loved this piece especially the nice twist in the tail. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. Enjoyable read as always. David

Quick, press snooze! Steamy write Alison, I really enjoyed this. Hugs Anna xxx

A brave and vivid piece Alison. Difficult to do erotica in some ways yet you've managed it well here.