Sunday, January 15, 2006

First Stone Comments

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The first time I saw you
was the first time I felt alive in a long time
I felt like I was Romeo reincarnated
I didn't have a stone to throw at your window
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Mary Nagy 18 January 2006

Aww, this is so sweet! My husband actually use to throw pennies at my window to wake me up (we were next door neighbors) and then I'd sneak out to meet him (or sneak him in) We were bad kids! :) But, it all worked out. Good luck with your Juliet, Romeo! Sincerely, Mary

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Hugh Cobb 15 January 2006

A lovely write, Cokbod. It is always flattering to be pursued by the other. Great images. May this feeling stay with you. Choose it. Hugh

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Ernestine Northover 15 January 2006

Very clever one this Cokbod, a bit of humour thrown in for good measure - excellent. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 15 January 2006

This is brilliant, yes in my opinion but brilliant none the less Thankyou

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Mandy Hartmann 15 January 2006

I deeply envy the woman, this poem is adressed to!

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