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First steps,
Unsteady and unsure,
Taking their first steps.
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The form is hidden in the feelings in the words. It wasn't until I read it again that I noticed the structure each line took on. Such an artful process you use. So very lovely!
Nice poem Greg. Very contemplative. I like the form too: 3 lines, then 4, then 5 - and then ending the same, but in reverse. Is there a technical word to describe this type of poem? (I'm not University educated, and have never gone into all the different forms that verse can take.)
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7/19/2025 8:53:24 AM # 1.0.0
This is wonderful Greg! The structure that is used seems to dance with clever rhyming descriptions! Each stage we pass through takes us, fast forward, but we feel each stage with great emotion!