First Step Comments

A very telling poem. Nothing beats a trial, but a failure: even if one fails, at least he has tried.

Impressive work,10+

as i see the past...the poem spotted my last.....thank you for the poem...a good reflection of life..a 10+++++

Courage and resoluteness are the right steps to surpass any distress in life...good write...your poem gives a clear message here, Kranthi...10

It is great that you have taken your first step in the ocean of life. Good Luck, Kranthi.

In this ocean of life, one has to take first step....sooner the better..............Good Write...........

Good flow with a soft touch

life is an ocean of mystery, and until you take the first step you will never know what lies ahead.

IF life is a ocean, sure we have to make the first step, boldly.

Get off your rump and live 'LIFE' - this is what i got from it.. hehe.. I like this poem

Life itself is mysterious, and knowledge is a vast as ocean...what ever it will be great you have taken the first step of going to the light of success.......meaningful poem...10

Made me wonder about life and it's - here today gone tomorrow.

truly poetic and full of raw emotion and thought..brilliantly done! u amazing! !