Saturday, February 28, 2009

First Snow (Version 1) Comments

Rating: 3.0

The boy and the dog
Stand in stillness on the waiting road.
Night’s embrace cloaks them in darkness
no less than invisibility.
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Nomad Omnia
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Gone Away 25 February 2010

I agree...this version is the best. The repetition if the first line brings it to full circle and makes it complete for me. A beautiful image.

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Marieta Maglas 12 January 2010

no less than invisibility nice meditative poem about snow 10/10

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Sandra Fowler 20 March 2009

A winterscape worthy of the name. I am moved by its simplicity. As always, Sandra

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Sonya Florentino 02 March 2009

this is beautiful, The first version is definitely the best one. The right one!

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