Friday, October 10, 2008

First Snow Fall Comments

Rating: 4.7

The moon's pale face illuminates mine,
As I stand here in the meadow.
I admire the path she's made across the water,
The path I long the tread o'er.
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Stephanie Dower
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David Threadgold 18 October 2008

It flows so well. thanks for the read. Regards Dave T

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Ron Flowers 13 October 2008

A very pleasant read, Stephanie. Ron

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Emily Oldham 12 October 2008

lovely description, keep writing

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I love your stle of poetry and the imargery you use.Another ten.you have wonderful poetic voice.

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Philip Kirkland 10 October 2008

Yes, you paint lovely pictures with your words.

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Manonton Dalan 10 October 2008

i could imagine you're in paradise. i love nature myself. it's lovely thanks.md

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Tom Balch 10 October 2008

great expression here, a lovely piece regards Tom

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