Tuesday, November 6, 2012

First Snow Comments

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I brought my bag of words to the park this morning; it's cold, but refreshing; so cold that I'm the only one sitting at a picnic table. I open a blank page of my notebook, ready to serve it its long-awaited breakfast of tasty nouns and verbs, flavoured with a few juicy adjectives and adverbs.

The first manna of winter is parachuting down, and at this temperature, it should last. I see my neighbour, Tom, coming with his Frisbee-chasing black Lab; my trusty notepad will have to wait awhile longer. I'll just throw a Frisbee or two, and explain that I have work to do.
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Smoky Hoss 11 November 2012

Bert, with these words you have put a fabulous vision in mind; I suddenly have a deep longing to sit by a warm, glowing, crackling fireplace with cup of java at my side, pen in hand, gaze out a frosty window and lose myself to the winter wind, and write word upon word that the snow reveals in a moment of dreamy wonder. What an amazing poem you have given us; simply wonderful.

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