Saturday, October 31, 2009

First Sign Of Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Old man winter has his sleeves rolled up
As he bursts through the Gateway Arch
Knocking over patio tables
And hats off peoples' heads
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Kirk Thomas
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Jean Dament 31 October 2009

I quite enjoyed your take on winter with the great sense of humor in this whimsical poem. Well done. Thanks for sharing; as it was a joy to read. Ravensong

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Callie Carroll 31 October 2009

An entirely different take on winter. I enjoyed it. Cal

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Wilson Leung 31 October 2009

Not much use of Poetic Techniques

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