Tuesday, March 10, 2015

First Sight Comments

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Love is but just at first sight
In all darkness it gives light
Bruised heart with abysmal plight
Wants to play with beauty as a kite
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Konab Ghumman 21 April 2019

Awesome poem. very Deeply. A wonderful expression.

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Thanks dear Konab

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Roseann Shawiak 13 March 2015

Life is but just at first sight in all darkness it gives light. Like a balm to this mind, giving hope through the darkness. Such a beautiful poem, Col! Great imagery and rhythm! Thank you, RoseAnn

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I am grateful dear

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Akhtar Jawad 10 March 2015

The poem is simply a piece of beauty..........................10

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I am obliged Sir

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 10 March 2015

You are very true. Love in darkness gives surely light. Very wonderful imagery makes this special. Nice one.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

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