Thursday, March 15, 2007

First Robin Of Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today heard a beautiful
sound, it was up in a tree,
sitting on a branch so alone,
spring is near by.
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COMMENTS
Anna Russell 18 March 2007

I'm not usually a fan of nature poems, but I enjoyed this. I think the simplicity of it is what really makes it work. Hugs Anna xxx

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Alison Cassidy 16 March 2007

Jim you have a wise poetic soul with a complete absence of pretension - unlike many on this site. You share your feelings with absolute honesty and your love of beauty and the natural world is infectious. I can see and hear your pretty robin. Thank you for sharing him. Love, Allie xxxxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 15 March 2007

This is a stunning piece and for many reasons, its simplicity and timeless energy, so positive to read, and as the bird song...it leaves a wonderful taste in the mind Love duncan X

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Patricia Gale 15 March 2007

Delightful spring time piece, may they keep singing.

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Sandra Fowler 15 March 2007

What a lovely positive piece. May you hear more robins singing very soon. Kind wishes, Sandra

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alice sunderland 15 March 2007

with you on the 'spring thing' jim. thank god its here. loved the poem. cheers!

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