you have a fantastic start here, the first stanza was golden, but it goes downhill from there. this needs to be expanded...it has such potential, i hope to see a revision soon. keep writing!
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you have a fantastic start here, the first stanza was golden, but it goes downhill from there. this needs to be expanded...it has such potential, i hope to see a revision soon. keep writing!