Saturday, October 1, 2005

First Regret Comments

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An amber regret
looms over me
for the first time
in eternity.
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Genevieve Surrender
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Joseph Harskamp 16 September 2006

you have a fantastic start here, the first stanza was golden, but it goes downhill from there. this needs to be expanded...it has such potential, i hope to see a revision soon. keep writing!

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Genevieve Surrender

Genevieve Surrender

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