Thursday, July 8, 2010

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Lips locked tight I'm not one to kiss and tell,
All those moments always went so well.
The sweet breeze blowing my hair,
blowing away any worry or any care.
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Keli Mims
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Marina Gasbey 17 July 2010

That is so sad... I think other people can really relate to this poem.... But I love the way it rhymed, told a story, and had a theme to it.... This was great!

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