First Rain Comments
The smell
Of thirsting loam
Soaks in when free to roam
For a short time in all its spell,
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First rain while falls with many drops on ground soil soaks these raindrops and a nice smell from soil comes out. Your perception towards natural happening is really very nice and excellent. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned..10
Such lovely feedback and missed it, my apologies dear KM missing this out, but thanks so much, belated though.
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9/15/2025 5:47:21 PM # 1.0.0
Thirsting loam! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, the dry soil when thirsts for rain... thanks for visiting