Saturday, September 27, 2008

First Poem To The Unknow I Comments

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First Poem to The Unknown I
Karen
A sudden wake from the book
On which I once bet my future
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Tian karen
loss september
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Jazib Kamalvi 18 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Tian. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Jerry Hughes 16 October 2008

Your poem started well Tian, fell apart at the end I fear. Try writing it again in free verse. Best wishes, Jerry

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Joseph Poewhit 27 September 2008

Sort of like a programed computer

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